just a walk

A Poem by blueseeker

this walk filled with irate curiosity

stomping innocent leaves

i question this world,

humanity.

we judge without guilt

only then conforming

to belong.

this walk…is my world.

reality.

© 2012 blueseeker

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MOON	Strong imagery. Lovely write Posted 12 Years Ago Strong imagery. Lovely write Rating /100

Leslie Philibert

Good poem with vivid first images, visual and the kind of picture you acknowledge
right away as truth, this poem extracts a lot of energy from a small picture, turning
it into a big pictute..

Posted 12 Years Ago

.	An interesting and lovable walk! 100/100 :D Posted 12 Years Ago An interesting and lovable walk! 100/100 :D Rating /100

Dayran

Sounds like an enjoyable walk.

Posted 12 Years Ago

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... exquisite poetry... i try very hard to not judge... but i'm human... and to err is human... my "walk" is the poetry i attempt to write... it's "my world" and i cherish it like i would cherish a dream...

Posted 12 Years Ago

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Added on September 9, 2012
Last Updated on September 9, 2012

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blueseeker

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discover passionately and be a fool doing so. im very interested in the impossible questions of this universe. or possibly the choices and actions of humanity. questions will always consume my mind.. more..