Past

fuckidunno

i let you in
and you pushed me o u t

and it pains me to say
that all you care about
is your
precious p a s t . . .

well, i wasn't in
half of it
so
there was nothing i could do
to stop you

from being
so
foolish
and
p u s h i n g   a w a y
everyone who
loved you...

i swear they did
once
maybe

but there's no way to tell
because
t h e y   a r e n ' t   c o m i n g   b a c k   n o w .

so go
and
hide yourself
in the trees

w i t h o u t   m e

because

i know you
w a n t  t o

i'd give you anything, darling
i'd do anything for you

but

you

wouldn't

do

the

s a m e

it won't be long
before
you finally
need someone

Reviews

[Jack Cassidy]

Letting things go is difficult for lots of ppl, nice job of bringing this concept to the surface. Nice rhyming scheme by the way...

[Michelle Kafka]

This is haunting. Too many people live in the past. You have captured it well.

[Megara]

nice write:)
very powerful!

[r]

OHMYJESUS LOOK AT THIS. I didn't notice this earlier. xD Oops. I'll review this once I do everything else, too. So now I have TWO pointless windows open. Lawls. :3

DGFKHJKGHKGFJH. I LOVE THIS. [i read this before i even finished typing up c33 cause im a bad bad person, lawl] AND IT IS SO PRETTY, AND SAD. I love ze emotions, per usual, and it reminds me of BMW, as always. xD "but you woudn't do the same" LAWL THAT MAKES ME THINK OF THE SONG BY BRUNO MARS. *hits self against brick wall*.

WHATEVERS. I LOVE IT. KAYTHANKSBYEYOUROCK. :DDDDDD

[Arianna]

this is a really....strong piece
i think its amazingly written.