Remember to Stop

Remember to Stop

A Poem by master squiggles

i remember
all the lost times
and how they called me
to them...

who are they?
what happened to them?
i suppose that things change
but does it have to be this way?

can't i have that time back?
can't i just go back?

i didn't want to leave
a place of beautiful things
i couldn't walk by
without stopping
to stare
at
who
i
used

to

be

© 2011 master squiggles


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OHMYFUCKINGJESUS. I f*****g love that. It's absolutely beautiful. ♥ M'God, it's like amazing. And soulful and nfdkjshfdkjhskf. It's like beautiful. Which I said already. I love the photo for it. ♥ And how you have 'stopping' underlined and in bold. Annnnddd, the way you have the lines. It could be a SONG. A BEAUTIFUL SONG. DSKHFDSHF. I was trying to figure out which part of 'em's my fav' part, but I couldn't decide, so... It's across between the beginning, with the 'lost' and the 'i can't have it that time back'. Love it.♥

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lolwhatthefuck simply cannot be used to describe this. It deserves a MUCH better jumble of words, Missy. -.- lol

Um...HOLYHADESWHATTHEFUCKISHOULDHAVEREADTHISALREADY. O.O

I love the wording and it's pretty and and andandandand. I can't really say ANYTHING else because it wouldn't do the poem justice so...

LOVE.

Posted 13 Years Ago


Memory lane can be a sorrowful road to walk upon at times. I like this poem of yours for it is easy to relate to, as well as simple and to the point. A nice piece of ink!

Wolfie

Posted 13 Years Ago


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OHMYFUCKINGJESUS. I f*****g love that. It's absolutely beautiful. ♥ M'God, it's like amazing. And soulful and nfdkjshfdkjhskf. It's like beautiful. Which I said already. I love the photo for it. ♥ And how you have 'stopping' underlined and in bold. Annnnddd, the way you have the lines. It could be a SONG. A BEAUTIFUL SONG. DSKHFDSHF. I was trying to figure out which part of 'em's my fav' part, but I couldn't decide, so... It's across between the beginning, with the 'lost' and the 'i can't have it that time back'. Love it.♥

Posted 13 Years Ago


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