Beautiful Disaster

Done really quick.. So it kinda sucks

He's as damned as he seems.
He's a beautiful disaster.
He's here and there, he's everywhere.
And I don't know where he's going.
But i'm going to hold on through everything.
He's everything I want and everything I need.
He's a beautiful disaster.
He's as strange as he seems,
but he's just like me.
I love him.
He is my beautiful disaster.

Reviews

[Dream Weaver]

Not too bad maybe a few minor tweaks
and then you'll have yourself a solid write.
But overall a nice write.

[Warick Ten Bohmer]

Powerful use of repetition. Interesting how you see him a disaster and yet still call him yours and love him. Reminds me a cyclone.
What would have been cool is some description of the damage he has cause and left behind. However the poem is what it is, and it's pretty much all it needs to be.

I still stand by my thoughts on you dropping the full stops. Also make your i in "But i'm" I'm.