Zest

 

 

Sensual love deceives one as
to the nature of heavenly love;
it could not do so alone,
but since it unconsciously has the
element of heavenly love within it,
it can do so.

Reviews

[krish]

great + very effective msg through ur poem.........
i liked + loved really.........the all few lines represent their own meaning,i think......
it's such a deep thinking......ur word's scent me...............
i wanna give u now 88/100....
really i loved it.............
may god gift u a preety beauty.................
have a lovley day..........................

[anartao]

Great poem ! I especially loved the use of "unconsciously", my idea of heavenly love is one beyond the conscious, beyond definition, and the act of consciously pondering it means it has already eluded you. As Lao Tzu said "The tao that can be spoken of is not the true tao". Beautiful work !!

[Aaron Browder]

Wow. It conveys a message that is simple and true, while at the same time taps the full elegance of the language. That's what poetry is all about, isn't it?

[Kaylor Mason]

Cool. The line where sexuality and spirituality collide is always a blurred one. That's why it's all so special

[Summer]

Blushing, brand new and already reviewed. Thank you!