Zest

 

 

Sensual love deceives one as
to the nature of heavenly love;
it could not do so alone,
but since it unconsciously has the
element of heavenly love within it,
it can do so.

Reviews

[krish]

great + very effective msg through ur poem.........
i liked + loved really.........the all few lines represent their own meaning,i think......
it's such a deep thinking......ur word's scent me...............
i wanna give u now 88/100....
really i loved it.............
may god gift u a preety beauty.................
have a lovley day..........................

[Grey]

hmm, have to ponder that one. Kinda feel like I'm going in circles when I read it. I may need a example or demonstration.

[Summer]

of course...now where to start. ;)

[writing mojo]

the enlightenment of unconditional love to the tones lusting the conscience mind stroll ....interesting anecdotal piece

[Sami Khalil]

A heavenly write...:)

[Summer]

Thank you!

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome...:)

[tHe]

Fantastic work, you are such a talented writer. I can't wait to read more!

[Amadi Judith]

great poem. with a technique of being quite brief so the message goes down the memory. I will rate you a 85

[Summer]

I heard from someone on here that an 85 is like being bored, not good.

[Amadi Judith]

85 is an A. to me 85 is high and on a second thought if 85 is considered low then I think 90 would do. I envy your technique and message. Please people score 50. 50 is a pass and 60 means good 70 means very good while from 80 above is excellent. 99 or 100 means perfect. so you are close to being perfect.

[Thy joke on me]

I like this poem, it is very gracious and harmonic. Good job. :)

[BL]

It's easy to get confused between love and lust and difficult to get both at the same time, I like way you have interwoven the meanings

[Summer]

Life is always confusing. But I think the one always inspires the other.

[BL]

Yes they are natural catalysts to each other

[MAC]

amen to that!

[Coyote Poetry]

I like the way you use the words and description in the poem. You twist them to leading the reader to a logical ending. Thank you for sharing the excellent poem.
Coyote

[Relic]

Good sensual love can indeed be heavenly when all sense of time is lost and we are totally in the moment enjoying bliss. I like the picture, it is a good representation of time in slow motion, an element that both literally and metaphorically allude to good love making.