Poetry Falls

Poetry Falls

A Poem by blueeyeddevel
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Id advise you to read this slowly, and absorb every sentence into your mind. Don't read it fast and let the words be brushed off like nothing even happened.

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Poetry Falls

Poetry falls, and you listen

Your eyes open to be seen by mine

Your breath slows to a perfect rhythm

The clouds part and my mind deepens

I lean in and whisper warm breath upon the cheek

The fall leaves crunch together as the wind blows

Our fingers come together to reveal a shy passion

My boots fall from my feet as I move slowly into you

My lips whisper soft words into your ear

I hear a deep sigh as we fall to the cool ground

Your lips kiss mine

Poetry falls to are skin

© 2011 blueeyeddevel


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a great read. the imagery is wonderful.
amazing poetry.

Posted 13 Years Ago


I loved the imagery you've created so fantastically in this poem. I could see the clouds part in my mind, and feel the whispers. I enjoyed this very much.

Posted 13 Years Ago


Sweetly done and enjoyable to read.
Only thing Are...when referred to people is spelled Our.
Other than the slight typo it is a very nice piece.

Posted 13 Years Ago


It allowed me to feel like I was being led into a meditative state.. engrossed with the two merging energies.. very passionate to me. I really love this.

Posted 13 Years Ago


This is so wonderful and so beuatiful.
Enjoyed this write.

Posted 13 Years Ago



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Added on August 16, 2011
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blueeyeddevel
blueeyeddevel

Inverness , FL



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2011 was the last time that I have been on here. I gave up on writing in 2011, and I think I'm trying to reignite my passion for this hobby. Its the only thing that's cheap for a hobby these days. S.. more..

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