Sound asleep

She asked me to stay in a raspy sleepy voice

So I lay on the floor by her side in a restless state

Each time I glanced over I seen a naked leg

It drove my mind to a crazy state

I twist and turn then I feel her arm lay on my side

My skin burns and stings of things I try to not think about

I lay there with my eyes closed

I lay there with my eyes open

I fall asleep for a few short seconds

Then jump to my wake with a quick thought of passion

I bend, I twist

I stretch, and thrust

I yearn for this moment, I know that so

I fade, I come to

Oh I know I won’t get a wink of sleep on this night

I think, I tap

I flop and clop

My head is a mess

Oh what do I do?

I see her lay in a solid state, eyes closed in a perfect silence

My eyes trace the shapes of the sheets

My hands scream to wonder

My mind fights back

Oh this is a war in my soul

I want to ravage

I want to handle this with the natural beast in me

As she wakes she asks me

How did you sleep?

Reviews

[Clairabel]

This is wonderfully passionate reading, but without being overtly graphic or sexual. It's sensual and yet, also quite romantic too, showing intimacy without using graphic description. Brilliant.

[Luscious Leigh (Leslie ..]

I love the way you are working the whole scene out in your mind, then the nice twist at the end. You may have a sequel to this, if he answers her honestly lol! Maybe too erotic with all the dreaming he had done. I love this!

[DeletedUser]

Passionate and very intimate. I enjoyed this poem; you captured the feeling of lust very well. It does have a restfulness. Good Job:)

[Megan]

aw wow!
That must have been a very long night for you but I know how you feel..I have trouble sleeping because of that when I'm around my bf. Very commendable you held back though! This was great reading, the description was sooo good :) you made it really easy to feel what you were feeling and understand what you were feeling. I think my fav line is "My eyes trace the shape of the sheets" it's just really intimate.
Great job man and thanks for posting this!

[VelvetRosetta]

Oh I just loved this! Lol poor baby I know you didnt sleep, but I think fighting the beast in you, may get you some good points, then maybe, just maybe...she will let you ravish her with your beastly instincts! =0
Just a thought.
I truly enjoyed this , it is very well written.