Black Stars, Black Night

Their was actually a sequel to this poem, but it wasn't very good, so I'm not going to post it. I really liked trying to focus on writing something around the tittle, that's how I usually start out.

Black stars Black night

Black stars fill the
sky and hollow hearts cry out to them to show there white light,
Black stars fill
the sky hollow hearts cry out to them to show there white light
and they don't answer back
Black stars fill the
sky with hollow hearts
crying out to them to show there white light of mystery
Hollow hearts cry out
to black stars that fill the sky for empty answers of love and life.
Hollow hearts cry out to black
stars that have no answers for them
Black stars fill
the black night sky and you
ask a empty question
that has no answer but time

Reviews

[VelvetRosetta]

That has no answer but time...

Sometimes we think we have time, but we dont really think that time could soon run out for us. In life we never know.
And the world is filled with hollow hearts...
Nice one!

[Ruth]

This is claustrophobic! In a good way :) Really deep and well written xx