Take a look around.

Take a look around.

A Poem by blueeyeddevel

Take a look around,

Watch as the walls bend and fold.

Her face shall appear and disappear.

Watch your regrets fade away from touch.

Jumping around won’t get you anywhere.

Not unless you know how to get somewhere in this place.

The skies are filled with stars, then blue with a cool breeze.

Don’t get lost; it’s only your dreams.

Don’t get lost, just artificial reality fading in and out of your mind.

Your dreams will trick and toy with your emotions.

 They know your true weakness.

They know your true hate, and fear.

Just don’t let them surround you.

No don’t let it all fold into you.

Don’t let it cut you.

Just stay strong.

Open your eyes!

Open your eyes to the grey clouds and the day filled with empty thoughts.

Open your eyes to a lonely mourning.

Open your eyes to doubt.

Open your eyes to happiness, even if it’s an artificial wakening.

Just open your eyes.

© 2011 blueeyeddevel


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"watch as the walls bend and fold, Her face shall appear and disappear."

The imagery there is astounding, and here...so sad...

"Open your eyes to happiness, even if it's an artificial wakening"

GOD...that speaks volumes, so beautiful, so hopeless, it's the grasping to nothing, it's almost an admittance of insanity...in one line.

Amazing, beautiful, and perfect.

xoxoxo

Posted 13 Years Ago



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blueeyeddevel

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2011 was the last time that I have been on here. I gave up on writing in 2011, and I think I'm trying to reignite my passion for this hobby. Its the only thing that's cheap for a hobby these days. S.. more..

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