StArS

StArS

A Poem by Caitlyn Ravyn

CuT Me oPeN && mY StArS

watch it heal &&

kiss my scars

I just wanna go insane &&

yell my pain

so all the f*****g

NEGATIVE PEOPLE

can cry with me

&&

we'll have a ball

in our suicide gowns

nothing is forever
you will turn yellow

soon girl

something will kill you

IF YOU DON'T

© 2014 Caitlyn Ravyn


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Suicide gowns.. tremendous job

Posted 9 Years Ago


So sad this went unreviewed...Its full of energy...I Love your poem...very Raw yet artistic...it speaks of You...I'm sure the presentation of your poem can be better with punctuation...but that's what I love about it...It's imperfection.

Posted 10 Years Ago



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Added on July 18, 2014
Last Updated on July 18, 2014
Tags: insane, gowns, girl, poetry

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Caitlyn Ravyn
Caitlyn Ravyn

New Orleans, LA