StArS

CuT Me oPeN && mY StArS

watch it heal &&

kiss my scars

I just wanna go insane &&

yell my pain

so all the f*****g

NEGATIVE PEOPLE

can cry with me

&&

we'll have a ball

in our suicide gowns

nothing is forever
you will turn yellow

soon girl

something will kill you

IF YOU DON'T

Reviews

[Brian]

Suicide gowns.. tremendous job

[Everett DeValle]

So sad this went unreviewed...Its full of energy...I Love your poem...very Raw yet artistic...it speaks of You...I'm sure the presentation of your poem can be better with punctuation...but that's what I love about it...It's imperfection.