I will Believe

aw the angst of love

I Will Believe

Lay your cool hand on my head
Tell me I'm really alright
I've always believed all you've said
Even if it's a lie, stay with me tonight
I will believe
No one can do what you do
You're like fresh water for my soul
No one can heal me like you
When this world takes it's toll
I will believe
Laugh at this fool so I can laugh at myself
Hold my heart away from it all
Take this angel's wings off their shelf
Glue them back on so I won't fall
Tell me you won't give up on me
So baby I will believe

Author's Note

please ignore gramar but any feedback is greatly appreciated I am trying to learn to be more descriptive so everyone understands what I am writing about instead of just myself..thanks

Reviews

[Lady Of Darkness]

I can see what your saying with this poem, so its easy enough to understand.

Take this angel's wings off their shelf
Glue them back on so I won't fall
Tell me you won't give up on me
So baby I will believe

I like how these lines flow together. nicely done