Falling Up

Falling Up

A Poem by Rave
"

Join me as we are set free

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Will you pull me down from this crystalline sky if I tell you it makes me want to cry? Will you hold me down and find the gravity? Or will you float around in the sky with my hand in your and finally set me free?

Leave me be

I'm just happy

Set me free

Oh don't trap me

Gravity gave up

You promised you wouldn't

Join me in falling up

As the others fall down

We fly high

No way they can get us now

We'll just go up forever

As long as I have you I can keep myself together

Now lets fly past forever

© 2009 Rave


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Ben
Very good.

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

gorgeous...

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Beautiful work! i loved it!

"Join me in falling up
As the others fall down
We fly high
No way they can get us now
We'll just go up forever
As long as I have you I can keep myself together
Now lets fly past forever"

good job! keep it up...

regards
Barricade...

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Aww! I loved this poem!

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Since you're just re-doing your WritersCafe stuff, I guess you're older than I am... but I'll say it's quite good, but I know this poem book called, Falling Up...

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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