no words to describe.

uhm, it's pretty much about being so in love, and when you know you should be apart, you miss them way too much. i think it's pretty obvious. i didn't use cool metaphors and what not.

in love with you,

my greatest fall,

trying to stay sane,

but i've lost it all,

so many times i've tried,

to keep from pain,

but i've given in,

carried away again,

is it my weakness?

my heart that i'm giving,

the death of me,

but i keep on living,

ribbons hold me high,

straying from faith,

i need someone strong,

if i could see your face,

the silences they say,

that this is true,

more than myself,

i believe in you,

is it your sweetness?

the lies tha you're telling,

our we the crime?

and love's just the felon,

hurt by you,

my biggest regret,

would definitely be,

the first day we met,

who knew love hurt,

so much i'd cry,

enough to prevent,

my words to describe,

i'm falling in love,

each time that i see you,

i'm screaming your name,

in hopes that you come through,

no, i don't want to break down,

don't push me away for someone else now,

i can't believe i'll be okay,

i'm missing yesterday.

Author's Note

i wrote this over a year ago. i think we were watching a movie in english class.
it's an amateur poem, originally a song for my dream band, so i left out the chorus, but it was the first thing i decided to put on here.

Reviews

[justjenn_2u]

I like this poem because you don't have metaphors through the piece. You are able to convey the words you want to say by "simple" words. Easy to understand and not forced. Very nice write. Keep it up!