Looking Towards The Future

All the tears.

All the pain.

All the sad memories.

I smile.

Because I know I'll be fine.

I know that I'll fine my happiness soon.

So I put my head up towards the sky instead

of looking down to the ground.

Put yours head up high towards the future.

I can't guarantee that the future would be

easy and would go your way.

But it will be bumpy and you might have to go through lots of hardships but you will feel satisfied when you reach to your end. :)

 

Reviews

[Barbara Walker]

You start out speaking of "I" then change the pronoun to "you". I think it would read better all the way through with "I". You wrote, "Put yours head up towards the future", again I would change that to"my", also "going your way", to "going my way" and the last line, "but "I" will feel "satisfied" when "I" reach the end" Drop the "to" before end. Oh yes, the sixth line, "fine" should be "find".
I was glad to read the positive love of self in this poem, as in your other poems it doesn't sound like you like and love yourself, depending too much on others to give you value, when you are a person pf value in your own right. One can't love others until one can love themselves. You are important whether you are in a relationship or not. Your worth is in YOURSELF. KEEP UP THE WRITING!