Moonlight, Desert, Rain

Searching for a saving grace

Moonlight, haunt me I'm feeling weak, please carry me tonight. Desert, Hide me I'm feeling scared, please take away my fear. I'm feeling lonely, won't you hold me. Rain, Fall on me Wash away my past, make the present clear. Love, Hold me, Fill my heart, help me believe again.

Reviews

[A. Amos]

Rain, Fall on me
Wash away my past, make the present clear.

Above lines are from out of the world, what an imagination and I admire the way you write. You have one of the deepest mind I have ever seen and you're God gifted talented. I truly feel myself lucky to finally meet you and read your work. Consider me one of your honest fan...Simply Epic!

[SAYED THANGAL]

the natural beauty has typically linked with the mental statement. the last part, (rain) is so appealing.
all the best,
sayed thangal

[annabellee]

Such a great write. Full of longing and emotions.
Enjoyed reading it :)

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it s very lovely poem. i like this desire there. with hope on the end . i like it thanks for writing