A Moment

Just Pure Peace

I awake and am graced by the sun and shadows They dance a love song, they dance the waltz, they move as one. I float there mesmerized, enchanted by this sight. Overwhelmed by warmth from sun, and movement by shadow For a moment I'm a dream, a heaven. A breeze becomes a blanket that washes away fear, and leaves a darling high. Bedroom becomes ocean, and noise becomes its waves. Sun becomes sand, and shadows the air.

Reviews

[A. Amos]

You're a star poet my friend and W/C is like a room for you, while you belong in arena's. This was amazing, you're princess of words and you command them my friend. The world needs to witness this beauty of words...bravo!

[aditya gawade]

a really nice poem. Quite scenic and imaginary.
Thanks!
All the Best :)

[Katie]

Thank you! :D

[R. L. Hill]

Mmmm...I loved this. I was transported to another world. "Bedroom becomes ocean, and noise becomes its waves." I particularly love this line. The second line, I feel, could be broken into a more easily flowing read, but the rest is delicious to read. Again, well done.

[annabellee]

What an enchanting and lovely poem.
Well done :)

[Daisy Morgy]

i like the imagery that youve used, and the idea behind it :) good write

[Chris Rampersad]

Nice and peaceful. I like it. :)

[Christoph]

I love the way this ends by just leaving the reader right there, basking in that moment. The rhythm just implies to me that the next line is mine, and whether intentional or not it is beautifully effective and it puts me right into that space. Pretty nifty little bit of magic you pulled off with this one.