Pianos

Pianos are falling apart

The ivory keys at the start

From there to the panel

It's too much to handle

It's breaking the strings of my heart

Reviews

[Mx.Shining]

I really like your last sentence, connecting piano "strings" to a more humane concept.
But If I'm allowed to say something negative; I'm not really flattered by the fact that your poem is double-spaced. It distances the sentences and makes it less pleasant to read (in my opinion). Furthermore, the part "from to the panel" seems to be a little bit unnatural.
I was, however, able to imagine piano's falling apart, which made me feel sad after reading the poem. ;).

[kasG]

Oh...a love limmerick to pianos. i like it.