A Story of Two ~ Koi Wa Shian No Hoka.

A Story of Two ~ Koi Wa Shian No Hoka.

A Story by imatotalboss
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A story of two people, Oni Watanuki and Miki Kan. Living in a small flat in busy Japan, this is an installment of short stories. If I get positive reviews I will add more. Happy reading(:

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I awoke and looked at my side, I was alone for Oni had fallen off the bed as usual I never could quite understand for how big that bed was how he always managed face flat on the floor. I looked down at him and smiled. He really does look cute while he sleeps, I wonder what he dreams about. I giggled silently to myself. Surely not about me. You're probably wondering if me and Oni are a couple? To answer you're question. No, we are not. You see I met oni a few days ago in the market while picking up somthing inexpensive I could take home and cook because I was extremely low on funds. Then I met Oni, Oni is tall, lanky, somewhat plain of face with an ever present smirk. He has a very calm manner, but also a very lethargic personality which can be quite hard to deal with at times. He had approached me in the market asking me if I knew of a place he could seek lodging and hardly thinking about it I said he could pay rent to stay at my place because I could use the extra money. He agreed and well, here we are. I have this sort of unconditional, unexplainable care for Oni. He's so beautiful to me and I can't understand it myself. I know he probably could care less but I know there's a reason for everything. Maybe I'm just getting ahead of myself.. *Sigh* I don't know. I always was attracted to the wrong ones.. He started to stir as if he was about to awake and I dashed under the covers so as not to elude to my staring at him while he slept. He awoke and slammed me in the head with a pillow saying "Wake up"... I pretended not to stir...."WAKE UP", "God you lazy, lazy woman. I will just have to eat breakfast by myself then, I suppose." He said leeringly knowing I was awake. I jumped up and near tackled him saying "Whattt!!!!!!! Not without me you!" He chuckled, "Well nice to see you're finally awake." I went back under the covers and grumbled unintelligebly. I wonder how this day will go?

© 2013 imatotalboss


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I think this is a nice beginning:) Cute and to the point I think:) The form is a bit confusing though. All the dialogue is mixed in with the whole paragraph. Though it's a cute beginning:)

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

imatotalboss

11 Years Ago

Thank you sooo much and I know, grammar was never my strong suit >.< I'm on a bit of a writers block.. read more
RainDancer1997

11 Years Ago

Well it kinda reminds me of an anime. It might help if you want a romantic movie and get ideas off o.. read more
imatotalboss

11 Years Ago

VERY good idea :D thank you!!!!!!

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