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Look in to my eyes,look deeply,read me like a book. I dare you,do you dare me too? You'll find no lies.               I'm sure there is a heart beneath your disguise you're not the tin man,youre human,you make mistakes,your heart breaks,trust I'll be there to help pick it up,I'll put it back together           sweetheart,why must you tear yourself up like this,my own feelings now I dismiss.the things I dont understand are what intrigues me most,if life was a masquerade,I'd be the host.                 Does it scare you when I get close? Why are you shaking,is your heart still aching? Time heals all wounds,       dont be afraid of me,Soon you will see.there's two doors here,one's the entrance,one's the exit Will you leave me,or give me a chance?                Love me for me,Cause who I am will always be here,Trust me dear.

Author's Note

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Reviews

[MrKnowAll]

Even though my Sherlock instincts tell me you forgot to press the "ENTER" key, the form is perfect , because it flows with your emotion. When I read it , I felt as if it was a live speech, straight from the heart , no over-thinking. More over, a lot of imagination is needed here; It feels like moving from one scene to another with a developing background. From a book , to a heart and then to two doors.

I enjoyed reading it! Keep on dear.

[Emrick]

I like the style. The title has made the body to loose its strength.
but its a nice poem.

[Emberlorna]

I have to say I kinda like the format it's challenging and I think it shows your true raw emotion. I really like this. Well done :}

[imatotalboss]

Thank you very much,:) I actually wrote this before I discovered the magically Enter key lol. That's why the form isa bit off, :P

[Emberlorna]

You're welcome :}

[The Watcher]

The format is a tad odd, but still a great poem nonetheless. I can recall times when I thought like this, and it reminds me that nobody is or was ever meant to be perfect. Nonetheless, awesome write and kudos to you.

100/100

[Willowtree]

I agree, the format is a little interesting. The poem was well written though:)

[The Watcher]

Indeed. =)

[imatotalboss]

Thank you all,(: It means so much!(:

[quarintine_deathangel]

Nice job, the writing flows well here and the imagery is good. I enjoyed reading and it kind of gives insight, thanx for writing ^.^

[imatotalboss]

Well tanx ;]

[Irvette Dauphine]

yea.. this is good and i like this..
but, this is a little bit mess that make me confuse to read it..
just try to make it better.. :)

[imatotalboss]

Yeahhh I didnt reallly know about the Enter key when I wrote this >.< But i believe the format is unique in a way,so I'm just going to leave it for now(:

[Irvette Dauphine]

well, i like how u write this. it's challenging me to understand this
good job :D