Maybe there's a light.

Maybe there's a light.

A Poem by blossom sour

What will become of us when we won't be on earth? 
When we will become dust and soul.
What will happen around us? where will we go?
Will there be hereafter?
Or is it just a hallucination?
Unknown or known?
We will pass the doors,one after another, to arrive to the paradise.
Don't let me fall, i won't burn.
I want to be free, not judge by evil.
Let me fly like an angel, give me wings.
Sea,earth,fire,air
I'll be everything.

© 2011 blossom sour


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blossom sour
Sorry for my bad english. What do you think of this?please comment

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DrD
Que bonito, chica. Me gusto mucho la seleccion de palabras y la forma. Felicidades, muy buen trabajo!

Posted 12 Years Ago


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Let me fly like an angel
give me wings...
Nice

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Beautiful write

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