slipping of the edge

slipping of the edge

A Poem by blooming oak
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before i left this past summer, for canada, i was falling of the edge of ths world. in to darnknes of lucifurs grip...sniking farther away.....

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once again, i feel my self slip.

slip off the narrow rim of this world.

and falling in to the pit of everlasting despare.

like .a cage, i feel the pain....

can witness it, lucifers works, but never alound out.

never alound to help.

 

sinking, falling, dieing.

its all in the black water,

where hate stirs.

waiting to claim the next victeam.

 

as i sink,

each drop seapes

it to my heart.

leadeding me with hopelessness.

 

i know light

is just above.

but i cannot bring myself

to reach in,

all i have to do is, take that

one step forward.

but once again,

i have slipped deeper

off the edge.

 

won't someone please,

pull me up

out of this blackness?

i can't breath.

 i can't hold on..

not even a second more.

 

and i give in.

stopping this consited war,

of struggling upwards.

the drakness has once again,

laid its claim.

for i have no fight left.

not any more.

 

i have slpped once again

off the edge of the rim.

once again, fallen

into dark water.

ocne again, i have no fight

to reach the warm light.

that shows me,

from above.

i have slipped off the rim.

 

 

 

 

 

© 2011 blooming oak


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blooming oak
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well m in high-school abd i love to write,read,and draw. but i always have a problem finishing them more..

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