flowing peace

flowing peace

A Poem by blooming oak
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found out about ths while n canada

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tell me,

have you ever seen

or felt all the engery

with-in you,flowing in harmony?

 

all arond nothing 

exept the mummering water

and the the wld brids

singing their song,

to each and every-one of us.

 

the crash of a water fall

and the trees, as far as you can see.

soome  might call it nothing

but i call it peace.

 

my breath matches that of

the stroke of the paddle.

with in me, not a thought stirs.

nothing exept the peace

of my energy, flowng in beat

to that of the worlds. 

 

 

© 2011 blooming oak


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like the last verse, this is really good, i enjoyed the read

Posted 13 Years Ago


if you ever have a chance to have an adventure....take it

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well m in high-school abd i love to write,read,and draw. but i always have a problem finishing them more..

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