Hangs

Just a random haiku i came up with.

The wind whistles by,

Throughout the dark forest trees,

Where the woman hangs.

Author's Note

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Reviews

[Lydia]

Kind of morbid, but darkly interesting. Hmm...I liked it.

[Mockingbird]

a really macabre image. this is the first i've seen as a haiku...they;re usually all happy and sunshine. i like this because it's dark, and you captured a scene i could picture in my mind's eye. great piece.

[Leslie Philibert]

A bit sombre,but you remember it.Good work.

[WhiteWillow]

Wow, loved it! Totally didn't see it coming, even given the title. A winner in any/every haiku contest, for sure!

[Kim]

So very nicely done! I enjoyed this.

[M.Kilani]

I do not really know how haiku works but I really like this image, not the woman hanging but the whole theme, quit dark and intense. well done

[Seshat Nidaba]

Wow, that was tense, great 3rd line. Real spoiler!

[Walk away slow poet]

This is wonderful, enjoyable read!

[FadingShadow]

Nice... and it makes the point come across

[TheKaylaPup]

I like this. It;s short, and simple, but really cool at the same time. This is the kind of poem that would be really cool on like the back of a book or at the beginning of a chapter or something like that, grabbing the redder in and making them curious for more. You should write a story to complement it. Great work!