Thank You

you know who you are.

I want to thank you,

For helping me so dearly.

You came into my life,

And now I see so very clearly.

You were here for so short,

It went by in a blink.

But our experiences together,

Really made me think.

If I did not know you,

I'd be back to what I fear.

If you never came,

I might not be here.

I miss you so much,

You made me feel great.

Not having you here;

There is so much I hate.

Even though we're far apart,

Don't ever forget me.

I'll remember you and your smile,

Which fills me full of glee.

I wish you were here,

Sitting next to me.

I want to say 'Thank You',

To Emma Seeley.

Thank you Emma.

-Mary

Author's Note

I know. I know. I used some stupid rhymes in there...

*OOPS, LOOKING OVER, I FOUND SOME MISTAKES. (EMBARRASSING). IT CAME STRAIGHT FROM MY HEAD SO...
THANK YOU FOR HELPING!

Reviews

[Yari Garcia (Older Prof..]

Very good. I think we've all met that one person that has changed our lives.

[newyearnorma]

wow really good

[Brianna Brie]

This is a very sweet poem. I believe people are put into our lives to enrich them. Some are learning experiences other help guide us. It is refreshing to hear a thank you. Nicely stated!

[Walk away slow poet]

This write is kind of touching, as well as poetic. I enjoyed this one and teh feelings you write with.

[TheKaylaPup]

Your rhymes are a bit corny, but it's still really sweet. It sound like you are both very lucky to have each other. I think it is great that you value your friend enough to write this for her. Hopefully you two won't be apart forever.

[13ReasonsWhy]

its about Emma. I'm one of Emma's friends her in Thunder Bay. she showed me that picture. you drew it. Emma is and will always be very lucky to have a friend like you.

[Brenden Moran]

the first stanza when you say, "you came into my", you need to finish what you mean. "which fills me full of glee" you might want to change that to "which filled me full of glee" or "which filled me with glee". I'd recommend going back through this and cleaning up some of the lines so it has a better flow, but it does sound good as it. Unique and good. Emma sounds like a nice person. Thanks for sharing.

[paparapapa]

This poem's really touching. A wonderful gift to a friend. Great write. ;)

[Sarah E. Pearson]

awwh, how cute!

[Lily]

KUTE!!!