A new Aly

A new Aly

A Chapter by Bloodyfox
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Pluto just found his first aly to go and become the world's greatest swordsman.

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            Pluto jumped up as he was shaken awake by a mysterious stranger. He quickly grabbed both of his glowing red swords from his back and stood in a attack position. Pluto hardly noticed others behind him as he quickly started swinging his swords at the stranger. The stranger pulled out a steel pistol out of his bag and took aim at Pluto. The stranger said in a thick accent “We do not want to hurt you we only want to talk.” And whistled softly as other from behind Pluto moved ever so quietly that he did not hear a single footstep they made. Just as Pluto was turning his head and caught sight of the others behind him he felt a sharp pain enter his body he could not move very fast of even have the strength to pick up his enchanted swords to fight back and the last thing he saw was them coming nearer to him before he blacked out.

            When Pluto woke up again he found that he was on a soft bed made out of straw and there was a delicious looking bowl of soup beside him. He got up and ate. After several minutes later Pluto heard a noise coming from the other room and quickly went back onto his bed. Just as he reached his bed a person came in. He was big about twice the size of Pluto and looked like he could crush a mountain with his bare hands. He walked in and handed Pluto his two enchanted glowing swords. Pluto looked around and muttered thanks to the big guy. As Pluto shifted positions the big guy said “You are new around here aren't you?”

            “Yeah I came from Argent city” answered Pluto thinking why he even talking to this new stranger. Then it hit him the memory of last night he checked his pockets and found that all of his gold was gone. He looked around panicking totally forgetting that the big guy was there. After two minutes Pluto remembered that the big guy was there and said “what happened and who are you?”

            “I am Rand, a traveler and I don't know what you are talking about I should ask you what happened I mean I found you in the snow freezing to death!” responded Rand.

            “Oh, well I was attacked by these people in masks yesterday. The leader said he only wanted to talk to me and when I turned around I saw like nine people coming towards me and the next thing I know I was on the floor stuck.”

            “Damn it, the damn bandits attacked again. I told them if they want to come on my land I will destroy them. Guess that threat didn’t work. Oh and I’m a traveler like you hunting fro treasure and killing useless monsters that get in my way. I use my great sword that sword been with me for years.” Pointed rand. Pluto looked to the side and saw the huge sword sitting beside fire place and gasped. It was like twice the size of his swords. Finally after two minutes of what Pluto thinks as useless talking Rand asked if he could join Pluto on his journey to become the worlds greatest swordsmen and after another ten minutes Rand said “ what are we waiting for let’s go!”

            And so the journey begins and they don’t know the danger that lay await for them…   



© 2010 Bloodyfox


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