Russian Roulette

a view on society...just an opinion. :]

 

I’m sittin’ on the ground,

The world is goin’ around,

And I think of all the hate

And I can’t stand the wait.

 

I wonder when it will end

And wonder who will win.

I guess this is what you get

When you play Russian roulette.

 

The stars are goin’ by

And I really want to cry,

But I know how it will seem

In this fucked-up dream.

 

I’m waitin’ for an end;

It’s just around the bend.

I guess this is what you get

When you play Russian roulette.

 

Give in; let it cease.

We all just want peace.

Give up on all the hate

And learn to appreciate.

 

© Harley//Bloodqueen//Rei//Cyanide

Author's Note

the grammar is like that on purpose. that is written as if i were actually saying it, not as if someone who speaks perfect English all the time is saying it. like it or don't, your choice. :]

Reviews

[DevilsNeedLove2]

Despite your stating on your profile that your writing is depressing, I actually found this to be very uplifting. The world definitely needs more people who reflect this sort of thinking; particularly the last stanza. As far as your writing being depressing- that has nothing to do with your ability as a writer or the value of the content. =) Keep up the good work- I'd love to read more.

[Dani California]

Give in; let it cease.
We all just want peace.
Give up on all the hate
And learn to appreciate.


Now that's what I'm talkin 'bout! :)

Awesome!

[Cyanide Suicide]

Thanks guys. :] This is the lightest poem I have, though. XD

But thank you for the reviews. ^^ I appreciate any and all comments//crit.

[Azizi- - !!]

This is in no way depressing! I actually love your style.
:3

[Berserker[Diktator Von ..]

Wow..this was wonderfully dark..great job..keep up the good work...=)

[Staci Brown]

kewl idea with the Russian Roulette aspect... the rhyming scheme is what threw me off tho...,as it felt forced. words can be just as powerful, even more so when we worry less about rhyming to please certain others lol :D

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