the cruelty of love

just read the damn thing

This world,

I don't know why.

I have no girl.

I have no guy.

 

 

I wish I was loved.

The razor sharpens even more.

The blade touches skin.

Death is the only cure,

to this unending pain forever more.

 

 

Shut the damn door.

If i were alive,

I'de have someone.

If i were a girl i'de be a w***e.

my lyrics are done.....

 

Reviews

[RachelReaper]

The words were in red, I think I know why. I know a lot of people that felt the same way you are now, but, the thing is that they get better. Half of them, their lives are... honestly, I can't even tell you. But somehow they can find the will to smile every day and laugh, and if they can, I bet you can, too.

[Angela]

Death is not the only cure for pain, there is also the option of living through it, because you really don't know what life can bring to you. Life is a blessing and should be treated as such, I do, believe me, see it from your point of view. But please be careful, I don't know you at all, but I would hate to see you dead. However the poem itself is beautiful, you do have a few spelling mistakes, but over all, it is really mysterious and leaves the reader wanting to read more. :)