The path

this talks about my path i walk

Is this the path i choose

 The path i wish to walk

   No,the path i walk has been

 chossen,tampered,and changed

If i losse control,will... this path

  Be lost,or will it be harder..

     To walk away from

Reviews

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. losing control is not an option ... and if the path has been tampered with ... it's likely to be damaging ... just my thoughts ... this is beautifully written ...

[Greg Skura]

We all have the opportunity each and every moment to change our path. Remember always stop to admire the path because the end of the path comes much too soon! I enjoyed reading your poem and the inspiration it gave me to leave this review!