Salty Meet.

Kind of repetitive, but there's a story behind it. Enjoy :)

"Give me you,

 I'll be yours.

 Just for tonight,

 be mine."

 

 Waterfalling tears,

 flood down her cheeks,

 as she strums her guitar,

 Where is the love?

 

 Crashing tears

 fall down her chin,

 as she goes online for companionship.

 Where is the love?

 

 Flowing tears

 dribble down her neck,

 as she glances at her phone.

 Where is the love?

 

 Fumbling tears

 stifle down her stomach,

 as she searches everywhere.

 Where is the love?

 

 Trembling tears

 stagger down her legs,

 as she realizes she can not find it anywhere.

 Where is the love?

 

 A broken tear

 clashes with the ground.

 as she knows it's all gone.

 

 There is no love left for her.

 

Reviews

[Antonio Valentino]

Hmmm... go to places and do things that interest you, and no, not clubs and bars, there, is where you will find others with some of the same interests as you... hey, kind of like this place, except this reality is virtual, and everyone you'll meet here will probally live on the other side of oh damn!

this was cool, I enjoyed it. there is someone for all of us, in fact there's many... you just have to put yourself in the right place for the right type of person that you want to meet.

Nice poem!

[Lily Mae]

I love the way you feel as though you cascade down with the tears.. A sad write well penned :) x

[Coyote Poetry]

A powerful poem. I like how the poem was like a change reaction. Each set of lines making the poem stronger and better. A sad ending to the poem. I believe love is timing and good luck. Two people must be at the same need at the same moment. Ain't so easily done. A excellent poem.
Coyote