Paine is a Common Fad.

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I turn around, and in his eyes is written something that seems to appear so commonly it's like a new fad. But his eyes are their own fad; a small divergence from the one people call 'pain'. One glance and I'm hooked, one glance and I just know the ache in your heart, the pain you are withholding. Don't try to hide it, conceal your pain from me. It's impossible. Like a mirror I relfect your pain unto you, make you realize the harm of trying to hold it in. The harm which will lead to self-destruction in the end. But like a window, you see right through me. When I'm open, you release your problems and they drift through me. Once you have used me as much as you needed, you leave because with the window open it's starting to get chilly. A little too chilly for comfort. And after you've left, I shut my windows once more, my wooden 'paines' holding me together, each part of the glass meeting at the center paine. And I realize this is the paine holding me together as I provide the window of opportunity for you to pass into a more pleasant spot, to provide you happiness.

 

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[Stormy Weather]

Woah, this is really cleverly put together! The title makes sense (well, duh) and is brilliant!!!!!!!!!!! I really like this, and on some levels, I can relate. Another great write!