Mirror rorriM

I sit and wait on this date feeling emotions I hate.

Emotions of hate , so I back track and track back to the oceans I've made.

Relieved the motions of fate, notions of safe, so I throw back this potion of sage. 

Self destruction coaxing with age. A little red button toting my name.

Poking my brain, can't think straight, believe I can't to this it came.

I sneeze and visualize my carpet with a blood stain.

Theirs no b***h in my eyes, I seize varmints but don't have Thud's aim.

I'm not playing a thugs game, but I see carnage, I'm not saying I claim sane

But I've slain Satan so many times I claim Saint. That red, I claim paint, That shame I frame fate.

I just want to go back to to where I came from in the first place, 

But that gate is not in the same state.

The hand I have now is different, I don't got that same ace. 

Its just not the same case,  From the back of my hand to outer space. 

Its like, If you look into a mirror, Do you see your own face? 

 

Reviews

[dan]

BLitZeD, This type of stream of consciousness writing (what I like to call "brain salad") is when your talent really shines its brightest. If the reader reads and then tries to determine what each line means the reader may actually give up in frustration. But this is a classic example of the whole being greater than the sum of its parts. After reading and digesting the whole thing the reader can feel its power, the gripping cadence of abstract thoughts uniting into a cogent entity. The meaning then dawns on the reader like a sunrise painted black. And I mean that in a good way.
One of your best. take care...dan

[BLitZeD]

thanks bro, always encouraging words

[annalysiar]

This one is.good I like it as a whole.

[wordman]

a profound,and thought provoking write my friend !

[Coyote Poetry]

Honest and true words my friend.
"I just want to go back to to where I came from in the first place,
But that gate is not in the same state."
Everything changes after a long separation. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[BLitZeD]

thanks man, glad u liked it

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome my friend.

[Emily]

Love this!!
Keep up the great work!!