Mirror rorriM

I sit and wait on this date feeling emotions I hate.

Emotions of hate , so I back track and track back to the oceans I've made.

Relieved the motions of fate, notions of safe, so I throw back this potion of sage. 

Self destruction coaxing with age. A little red button toting my name.

Poking my brain, can't think straight, believe I can't to this it came.

I sneeze and visualize my carpet with a blood stain.

Theirs no b***h in my eyes, I seize varmints but don't have Thud's aim.

I'm not playing a thugs game, but I see carnage, I'm not saying I claim sane

But I've slain Satan so many times I claim Saint. That red, I claim paint, That shame I frame fate.

I just want to go back to to where I came from in the first place, 

But that gate is not in the same state.

The hand I have now is different, I don't got that same ace. 

Its just not the same case,  From the back of my hand to outer space. 

Its like, If you look into a mirror, Do you see your own face? 

 

Reviews

[zella]

best thing i've read all day!!!!!!

[micky]

Ahhh my talented buddy.I've been gone awhile but ur talent has grown old man,i really loved the rawness of this piece

[BLitZeD]

thank you mouse. hope all is well

[micky]

I'm alive lol how bout you

[BLitZeD]

same s**t dif day, u still in the cape? lol

[micky]

Yes with all the lions;P

[BLitZeD]

eryone loves lions

[Raven]

wow,amazing.i can understand every word and get a good image of what your saying.i like to picture images of poems i my head.it's my way of trying to understand the poet.

[Cyndy Robinson]

Love this. Love the sharp clear writing. Love the paranormal/karmic references. Favorite line of all time. Maybe forever, lol. "But I've slain Satan so many times I claim Saint. That red, I claim paint, That shame I frame fate." Perfect!

[BLitZeD]

thank you very much

[slightly terrified]

I've been reading through some of your poems and I think this one is my favorite. It's short and simple but very well worded and interesting. I think poetry is one of the best ways to express ones thoughts/feelings and you did amazing. Keep it up!

[BLitZeD]

thank you, glad you liked it. and i agree, it is one of the best ways.

[BLitZeD]

you on now?

[slightly terrified]

I haven't been on this site for a long time but i got the email that you commented! I am on now. Haha

[BLitZeD]

thats f*****g awsome, lol im flattered with the special email notification u got, ya site kind of dead, all my stuff here tho :? imma message u tho

[Yurie Lee]

Honestly, I kind of relate to this poem. It talks about the disassociation of oneself, and that is what I am currently experiencing. Sometimes, I don't even know who I am. The last line here really exemplified the point. And sometimes I wish I can go back to being who I was a couple years ago. But I can't, so. Anyway, very relateable poem. Thanks for writing it~

[BLitZeD]

glad you could relate, i often feel ways that music or in this case poety does not seem to touch upon, your comment here is the reason i share what i write. youll be fine, stay true to yourself and everything else will work its self out around you. it always get better. lifes a b***h, because if it was easy it would be a s**t XD keep your head up youll be fine

[Lyn Anderson]

Nice format, gives it a frenetic feel. The question, when we don't feel ourselves, who is that person anyway?

[BLitZeD]

thanks, and once i figure out who that person is ill let you know

[unfathomd]

Was that rap or poem? ;) severely psychocool! xD :D gr8 one bro :D :D

[BLitZeD]

I see no difference in the two . thanks man

[V.L.Mir]

Wow. seriously, just wow. Whenever I read these lines, I feel like Eminem doing a rap in "Love the way you lie"

[BLitZeD]

lol thanks bro. glad you liked it

[iamshadowine]

amazing! truly loved it! the end is so nice! keep writing @BLitZeD !

[BLitZeD]

:) highly appreciated