Nothing To Prove

I write like this because i fight like this.

I'm nice like this, f**k around and throw a superman fist. 

said night night b***h, 

I'm unexpected, your reading a Sand-Man kiss.

DOT DOT DOT

BLitZ3D

What to write I don't even know, just gana rough draft this then throw it up as a post. 

Do I hit you with a bunch of slick rhymes while telling a story at the same time? 

Or play on words, that subliminal tip, either way the styles mine.

Would it impress you if I rhymed orange? already killed that word dead. 

A distressed Carnage.

Maybe rhyme the syllable's individual, or write a sentence then run it backwards the next line, oh that's right, feel like I hit that one to many times.

Well s**t, I'm in a situation, a pickle, a bind. 

I could just write in a fashion so you unintentionally hear the beat in your,

Dot Dot Dot, F**k never mind.

I'm pretty good at battling, perhaps ill find an opponent and ohh. 

well what if I just verse myself and ohh

Ain't this some s**t

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DOT,DOT,DOT

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BLitZ3D

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It's a good thing I have nothing left to prove

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Reviews

[dan]

BLitZeD, One of your best, a work of metafiction...writing a poem about writing a poem. The way that you illustrate the twisted thought process that poets must sort through, shuffling the index cards of the mind, a Rolodex of ideas jangling loudly...TURN IT THE F**K DOWN, you wish.
Compose yourself or tear it up and start again. Get if f****n' RIGHT, d****t!!
Great piece, sir, I'm saving this one in my library. take care...dan

[BLitZeD]

thanks man, this is a part , not direct but a lead up to my next pc ,