Midas Touch ~Shawna & BLitZ3D~

MIDAS TOUCH

BLitZeD & Shawna

I'd like to elaborate on this collaboration.

A disasters fate or the rise of a new nation? 

Shawna and Blitzed hang a flag to welcome the decimation.

Ink to this paper like Cruella Deville to the dalmatians 

I roll a blunt still faded, I'm ill face it. 

The emperors new clothes but you stand their naked 

Not exempt from the lion, a king, I eat you like steak and potatoes.

A bit off track, 

Just wanted to make sure you know its a fact that we will make it.

Two minds set to the same task. 

She likes to write, I like to bite.

When its done you see the message hidden under that mask. 

inside your emotions stir, and you feel a bit blown back,

No need to fight, word play wrapped in rhymes real tight.

Understandings clouded bye a path with no lights.

So we put faith in each other, hold hands and step out into the night.

On a mission of words, bold stands, and a story of morality all within our sight. 

On our mission we fly high, higher than you can see with the naked eye

With our pens of gold we reach

Into that great expanse of endless sky

Touching it, owning it,

Making it ours

Like the power of the gods of old, 

Busting, trusting, even lusting

After words that will be told

For generations to come, 

they'll talk about where these words came from

Joining the ranks of Will and Dickens

Hold up, where's the women?

More like Maya and Emily

The stories inside us, to not tell, would be agony

So Blitzed gets down

Twisting tales on a scale that can confound

And I drop the words

With a timing and rhyming that can mystify 

Laying down, rising up, our words soar

Breaking out, ripping through, our voices roar

Every one wants to be a lion until its time to do lion s**t,

So bring the gore

This is a lifestyle, a past time in the present tense,

Not a f*****g chore 

Use these words like hoes, pimp galore, 

Freshly picked lines, w****s at the grocery store,

Give me some more in tangled compassion

Won't hold back I see no need to ration

Something written on a cold rack, call it fires passion 

As we mix styles to bring to you a brand new fashion 

This is an experiment to see what happens when Eve and Adam get to mashing 

If you fall I'll catch you, so give them hell till they start ashing 

If you stall, I'm your net boo, right behind you ready to start blasting,

If you call, I'll be right through, turn green and get to smashing 

You know you did it right when its over but questions they're still asking 

Salty taste in the mouth, stings long lasting 

Long like elastic, sharp like jagged plastic

Some references are invisible but still clobbering rhymes, s**t was fire, give me four like Fantastic

And a bottle I'm honored so far she's brought me nothing but pride 

I twist words but she taught them gymnastics, now to Shawna for a couple more lines 

Rolling this collaboration

Our thoughts converge, diverge, and re-emerge

Into a mind-bending, soul-rending declaration

Through it all I burn with the urge

That this paired up piece

Must be shared up please

Because through these rhymes I have learned

That a lesson must be earned

I'll share it with you now, boo

Even though you know it too

See these rhymes that we do

Have some magical mystical kind of voo-doo

This golden pen of ours is indeed mightier than the sword

It shakes, breaks, re-creates, and somehow we become that medieval bard

Into your soul we speak, havoc we wreak on that emotional chord

And with that lesson shared with you all, I have the last word

Author's Note

http://www.writerscafe.org/ShawnaMars

Reviews

[costa siwale]

lyrical mastery, well elaborated verses and cases
mythical references and allegations,
am hook, like pike on a line in icing fish style.

Great job you guys.

[BlaqkShadow]

Awesomne collab, the styles really sit nicely together. Again a passionate and well delivered piece, the timing of the words is perfectly balanced and in sync, you should both be very proud of your work. Only thing I'd point out, only because I'm a grammar nazi is "but you stand their naked" should be there. But I'm a twat that way :D Be awesome ! X

[Emily]

Very nice wording!
Keep it up!

[annalysiar]

This is amazing its hard. I like it. So raw

[wordman]

well blitz this is a master piece !