Optimus BLitZeD (excerpt)

Collab in progress with Silent Poet

~Optimus BLitZeD~

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I'm quick at the wrist.

A flick of that shit

You wake in abyss.

Another reality like Oculus Rift.

~Optimus BLitZeD~

Black Ops, buy from black shops, optimal risks.

Red dot on bad cops, interchangeable clips .

Turtle shells on roof tops, Splinter-cell capable, slips

In undetected. 50 cal. hits that face and just rips

Past skin, bone, and cartilage to the brain stem in bits.

Cartridges plus marksmanship equal carnage, be damned if he lives.

Walk up with a raptor claw and stick the blade in his ribs.

Zigzag pattern, give the pastor a call, split um down to the hips.

Zig Zags, smoking green pastures, a  blunt and a spliff.

Deceptively a cybernetic artist of the con, rearranges and shifts.

Fall of Cybertron, with Nike's on, im a hyper ROM with no grip.

I'm ill. No face. Can't feel it.  I'm sick.

Your witnessing the transcendence of 

~Optimus BLitZeD~

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Reviews

[costa siwale]

the fusion of so many vivid concepts to create a well fabricated construct is incredible.. fierce articulation, wonderful

[BlaqkShadow]

Another epic piece Maestro, a round of applause and several Jammy Dodgers for you, love your work it's a joy to read, sorry I'm so behind, slowly chugging my way through! XxXx

[E G TEN]

Your in Beast Mode here Blitzed, 'ROM'- read only memory.. That's the way to
Finished it off my Friend. Outstanding Job, very cool Thanks EG

[BLitZeD]

haha, i'm glad you caught that, thanks man

[Emily]

Very nice poem!
I really liked it!
Keep on writing!!

[annalysiar]

Check you out. I love the flow amazing write

[wordman]

m and m,snoop dog too! they aint got s**t on you
you write about drama,you write about weed
now here you go,you planted a seed

[dan]

The second piece in a row I've reviewed that contained weed references. Making me hungry. BLitZ3D, I don't know what to say about this other than your writing just seems to get better, more accomplished and polished with every new effort. When I go to my requests queue and see one of yours there I head straight for it right NOW. Another kick-a*s BLitZ3D piece, sigh. take care...dan

[BLitZeD]

thanks man, wait till you read the whole thing when its done, between me and silent poet the word play in this is going to be f*****g fire.

[dan]

just RR me, OK? dan

[BLitZeD]

i will when its posted

[BLitZeD]

sent you a few