Time

Time

A Poem by BLitZeD

Life changes and rearranges
So they relocate us to different cages 
The generation that made us 
This outrageous and famous
They proceeded to name us
Everyone said X was bad 
But Y proved to be shameless
A world of technology adapted and turned heinous 
Hackers and criminals, pirates and thieves
The shadows in the night that freely roam the streets
A knife in the sleeve, a knight brought to his knees
A gun to believe a night one perceive
As time passes the rifts slowly decrease 
Government curfew decree, in a time of chaos 
The reality sets in right after the health disease 
Who receives the legacy when the next one leaves
 As one grows old the mind closes but can still feel the breeze
When the time comes either side will willingly hand over the keys
While the other takes the wheel on a ride to be set free. 
But we do understand i feel the same way about Z
Skinny jeans are for girls, cross your legs and drink tea
Cheers to the last of a dying breed
 We followed through with our threats, your not a Gangster to me
Id shank you and leave, 
Wouldn't even run, ill walk away from the scene, 
The beast can always change but 
The 
Sheep 
Will 
Always 
Scream

© 2015 BLitZeD


Author's Note

BLitZeD
The Lost Generation -
The Generation of 1914 1890-1915 100-125
The Interbellum Generation 1901-1913 102-114
The Greatest Generation 1910-1925 90-105
The Silent Generation 1923-1944 71-92
Baby Boomer Generation 1945-964 51-70
Generation X 1961-1981 34-54
Generation Y - 1975-1995 20-40
Generation Z 1995-2015 0-20

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Ha! Look what I stumbled on to...a lot of heart with an enormously resounding voice. "Blizzard" huh. You call this the chill? I call it the fire :) Excellent!

Posted 8 Years Ago


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BLitZeD

8 Years Ago

haha thanks. how did u stumble here? contest? and its BLitZeD not blizzard but that was a clever c.. read more
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8 Years Ago

Ah, BliitZed :) my bad. Makes a hell of a lot more sense now haha Ya, I saw you post it for the con.. read more
BLitZeD

8 Years Ago

thanks glad you enjoyed
rhyme scheme ♥
this poem is amazing ♥♥

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

BLitZeD

8 Years Ago

aww thanks
I absoloutely adore this for so many reasons we simply don't have the time. I love the writing style and the way the rhythm is kept just right throughout. I love the subject matter, looking and reflecting on the state of our surroundings. I love the words and the descriptive prowess in the lines.
I adore the first lines : Life changes and rearranges
So they relocate us to different cages " it's so powerful and so true. Keep it up man! XxXx

Posted 8 Years Ago


BLitZeD

8 Years Ago

::) thanks !!
I really like it!!
I like the topic of it!
Keep it up!!

Posted 8 Years Ago


A knife in the sleeve, a knight brought to his knees.. niceeeeee line!!this was deep in so many ways enjoyed this

Posted 8 Years Ago


As always your lyrical poetry and its unique delivery un flash my stuffed capillaries and open my mind to intricate conspiracies which in retrospect are our current reality. Powerful themes in this one Blitzed.

Posted 8 Years Ago


BLitZeD

8 Years Ago

thanks man, always a good feeling knowing people like it :)
Amazing. Just amazing. Is all I cal really say. Such honesty

Posted 8 Years Ago


BLitZeD

8 Years Ago

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annalysiar

8 Years Ago

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Wow! This is some of your best writing! The rhyme scheme is solid, though several times you allow that pattern to stray a bit, but that's a GOOD thing! Keeping a solid rhyme pattern as long as it serves is great; however if you can throw little mechanical deviations in the reader takes notice, letting them know to pay attention to the shifts. Your wordplay is, as usual, as good as ANYONE else's is, so there's not much left to critique. Great writing, sir. take care...dan

Posted 8 Years Ago


BLitZeD

8 Years Ago

as always, thanks man. glad you liked it
This poem is really good. Real talk..Very deep in nature..with each passing generation badness will repeat itself from generation to future generation, a continued cycle....continually worsening..."The beast can always change but The Sheep Will Always Scream." This sentence says it all. Well written..Keep writing.

Posted 8 Years Ago


BLitZeD

8 Years Ago

thanks for all your encouragement
My eye scanned the poem and things jumped out to me, I saw the sheep will always scream as well as capital X and Y. A flash of thoughts than a reference for X and Y chromosomes, then I started reading thinking of cloning sheep, even the first two sentences seem to match. Ha Ha! I had to stop and start over halfway through wondering what had I missed, then I saw (The generation that made us) and it fell into place and I am still laughing at myself. I guess that is the way it is with us early baby boomers, we are always jumping the gun always ready to pull the trigger :~)

Posted 8 Years Ago


BLitZeD

8 Years Ago

haha glad you had fun with it. thanks for reading

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