Death of an Ang3l

Death of an Ang3l

A Poem by BLitZeD

I'm Isis
Sike kid
I'm just righteous 
All through the night my minds like this
I'm physic 
That's right b***h
Sights s**t
See me within, the lights lit , 
BLitZeD in bliss
Omegas in the mist 
Azrael in chains 
But lets be real, there all one in the same 
Yes, im sane, let me explain 
One is like the Joker, 
A pocket full of knifes, 
The others like Bain 
When he beat the s**t out of the Dark Knight
Omega is the knife, the moment when batman looses his life 
Omega is the mask,  that regulates the gas just right
Azrael pushes the blade deep from the shade
The gas from within, he causes the haze
BLitZeD is the player, the one this game don't phase
The one that walks in like its nothing and sets the bomb under the stage 
Three pieces to a puzzle, together they make the forth
Not until they come as one do you see who really holds the pitch fork
Death Of an Angel, 
Take those words and contort 

© 2015 BLitZeD


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I love the beat, it reads like a slam poem!

Posted 8 Years Ago


Great poem my friend, it's loaded with vivid descriptions.

Posted 8 Years Ago


BLitZeD

8 Years Ago

thanks alot
you have some lines that just hit me with a sharp edge (All through the night my minds like this
I'm physic) you have gotten better and i thought that wasnt possible :)

Posted 8 Years Ago


BLitZeD

8 Years Ago

awww ty ma
silent poet

8 Years Ago

you're very welcome mmm ;)
Awesome work, fantastic structure and beat :D Keep it up! X

Posted 8 Years Ago


Very nice poem!
Very well done!!

Posted 8 Years Ago


This is written with as much sharpness as the Omega blade that rips through each verse. The handle is clearly in your hands wielding away with brutal force. There is blood in this one but it drips with confidence.

Although it is epically written, I feel it only touches the surface of what's to come in your writing. Isis emanates from hell. They've done hellish things. You reflect their devilish ways in this poem through the lens of arrogance, as it should be. They are no angels are they? And yet, an angel has died, in fact many.

Keep wielding your pen my friend.

BLitZeD indeed.

Posted 8 Years Ago


BLitZeD

8 Years Ago

s**t, that was an epically written review, i feel like it might have been better then the poem. lol... read more
I love the this... Captivated me throughout the poem.

Posted 9 Years Ago


BLitZeD

8 Years Ago

mission accomplished lol. thank you
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dan
Not being familiar with the Batman story this is based on, I didn't know any of the characters mentioned, nor did I know the storyline, also hampering my ability to understand this piece. The writing was, as usual, well done but without an understanding of the things I mentioned I was just lost. Had I understood the review would reflect the excellence shown. take care...dan

Posted 9 Years Ago


dan

9 Years Ago

I saw "The Dark Knight," with Heath Ledger's great Joker. I don't go to movies anymore, just wait ti.. read more
BLitZeD

9 Years Ago

https://kickass.unblocked.pe/ download bittorrent to open files . all the movies you could wantread more
dan

9 Years Ago

Thanks, BlitZ3D, but I know how to find the movies, I'm only half-incompetent because of my age (58).. read more
Critique: (Yes, im sane, let me explain) I'm
(A pocket full of knifes) knives
(the moment when batman looses his life) loses
(The one that walks in like its nothing) it's
(together they make the forth) fourth
(who really holds the pitch fork) pitchfork

Review: I normally don't review works with new slang because it almost always has a hate connotation and being uncertain of the nuisances in their meaning I have no right to judge. Coming from at least two generations back I would rather look on silently than make a comment uninformed, so I hope you understand and will forgive my choice to forgo the review due to my old fogyism.

Posted 9 Years Ago


BLitZeD

8 Years Ago

im just happy your looking on, silently or loudly haha
Dang. This is really cool dude..

Posted 9 Years Ago



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