Intensity Mash

Intensity - BLitZeD

http://www.writerscafe.org/blitzed

I miss the intensity that these drugs bring to me

inside the beast listens as the demons sing to me

dark armies march, a sign of the king i'm to be

Mayans chart, minds marked, 3rd eye blind, Noah cant step to me

Aztecan, legendary Arc, The Convenient, has revealed i see

the power in which Mosses used to part the Red Sea 

Intensity - Young King Kwan

http://www.writerscafe.org/youngkingkwan

"I miss the intensity that these drugs used to bring forth,
My inner beast is not to listen to the demons as they sing chords,
Dark armies march, let me show you what a kings worth, 
Mayans gold, Tired and old, still up to battle those who swing swords,
Tlaloc couldn't drown me out, Xerxes sent one million plus,
I'll split the sea and crash it down, Moses, fourteen, Exodus,
The power's like a high, I swear It's like a rush,
I feel it flowing through my veins as if it was the kush,
Lightning bolts from zeus' hands claiming you're a god,
You shouldn't let a mortal expose your damn facade, 
So step to me I dare you, meet me in the centre ring,
A blacksmith in my own regard, I use my hands for everything"

Intensity-Lost Rose

http://www.writerscafe.org/Invisiblewriter

My feelings go in a cycle

My powers are greater than archangel Michaels

Im at the very top of the food chain

All your attempts to beat me will be in vain

You can't defeat me

Do I have to make you see

I'm the ruler of the world

I can make you want to be furled

Intensity - Word Man

http://www.writerscafe.org/wordman

My eye`s wide open,yet i cannot see

smoking my crack,makes me feel the power of moses

as he parted the red sea

the mystery of the mayans can`t touch my mind

my eye`s wide open,yet i`m blind

noah nor moses has nothing on me

when i`m high,i can part the sea... 

Intensity - Julie Gerness

http://www.writerscafe.org/juli1234

I miss the intensity that these drugs bring to me,

Inside the beast listens as  the demons sing to me,

Dark armies march, a sign of the king I'm to be,

Mayans chart, minds marked, 3rd eye blind, Noah can't step to me,

Aztecan, legendary Ark, The Covenant, has revealed I see,

the power to which Moses used to part the Red Sea,

Was I sucked into a vortex of Intensity?

Was the drug scene only cant and hypocrisy?

Was the trip ever worth the ride to me?

Intensity - Shawna

http://www.writerscafe.org/ShawnaMars

I miss the intensity that these drugs bring to me 
inside the beast listens as the demons sing to me 
dark armies march, a sign of the king I'm to be 
Mayans chart, minds marked, 3rd eye blind, Noah can't step to me 
Aztecan, legendary Arc, The Convenient, has revealed I see 
the power in which Moses used to part the Red Sea 
That ancient power I have wielded inside of me 
Power to make my enemies flee 
Power to conquer all that I see 
Authority of the ages entrusted and thrusted within me 
To shape the worlds, I held the key 
Should I use it for destruction, or with it show my dignity 
Could I wield it to bring about a euphoric eternity 
Or would I fall beneath the weight of its responsibility? 
The answer no longer matters now for me 
As I have somehow lost that certain intensity 
Perhaps those demons forgot their song to me 
And now I'm damned to sit in the left over debris 
The songs of the beasts now cries of a banshee 
When I left the drugs, so the power left me 
And I must discover how to live with being free

Author's Note

Young King Kwan -- http://www.writerscafe.org/youngkingkwan
Lost Rose -- http://www.writerscafe.org/Invisiblewriter
Word Man -- http://www.writerscafe.org/wordman
Julie Gerness -- http://www.writerscafe.org/juli1234
Shawna -- http://www.writerscafe.org/ShawnaMars

Reviews

[BlaqkShadow]

Excellent love the way all the different views are brought together in this awesome piece of writing. I love your work and the collabs you do with others are always top-notch.

[Coyote Poetry]

Very nice use of words and thoughts. You honored some good writers also. Always a pleasure to read your words and thoughts.
Coyote

[Blue]

I feel as if I'm a rapper while I read this mentally. I wish I could be as good in rhymes as you are.

[Johnny]

not bad at all! great collab! but to be honest rap is not my thing :/ lol but well written nonetheless

[wordman]

looks good to me ! ready for the next one

[Shadowkai]

Great work, Sorry I haven't been active recently but I'm happy that your work was the first I read it makes me happy to be back,
I promise to read anything else you've sent me

[BLitZeD]

glad ur back, hope all is well, im glad my s**t was the 1st you read also lol

[dan]

A GREAT mash-up done by some great writers. The theme you set with your initial verse is followed nicely by the other writers, making this a project I wish I would have had time to contribute to. Great idea, great final product! take care...dan

[BLitZeD]

agreed, every1 did well. ty sir always a pleasure

[dan]

Please call me dan, I appreciate sir but it makes me feel old...which I kinda am anyway 8^) Have a good one...dan

[Calamityofgin]

I wish I understood what's going on here with the mashup? I have an idea, and will investigate after, the links aren't sending me..
That said, great f*****g stuf Blitzed baby! I mean. Yea.. This is intense bad a*s poetry...biblically and anthropologically sound while being twisted and give full due the props to that ellusive c**k suck sumbitch...the first great high...then you are on a mad furious chase that does not end until you surrende r....

Much love and respect darlin...
Calamity of jennifer

[BLitZeD]

a mashup is just like a giant colab. this one they all went off mine, the other one monster mash had less of an outline, only thing needed for that was 8 lines...the links arnt working because this site dosent support hyperlinks, you have to coppy n past that into the url bar. or just type it, but its links to their profile pages just so you know.
thank you you for your review, glad you liked it. ;)

[Calamityofgin]

I reeeaally did, that's basically what I was thinking
Very very cool sweetheart. I want in next time!! I can be awesome, I don't just do erotica...lol I host historical poetry comps on my home site. Thanks for the this.

[BLitZeD]

lol ill make sure i hit u up then ;)

[Calamityofgin]

Ha-ha! Thanks....

[annalysiar]

Its real. Raw. Powerful. ..

[BLitZeD]

thank you kindly

[annalysiar]

You're welcome