Hi Blitzed. You sent a read request for this, so I gave it a shot. It's interesting because I absolutely HATE rap and yet I found myself bouncing along to the rhythm of this. Then I read another review that also mentioned rap. I haven't the slightest idea what it's about but it seems pretty hostile and angry. And yet while I don't like it at all, at the same time I can admire the phonetics and rhythm that you've put into it.
Posted 8 Years Ago
8 Years Ago
thank you, the way i write i think people call it rap because its not your typical poetry, the way i.. read morethank you, the way i write i think people call it rap because its not your typical poetry, the way i see myself im a storyteller poet that likes to rhyme. i mean dr seusse wasnt a rapper. haha. again thank you for taking the time to review it and im glad i could atleast get you to bob your head a little :)
Interesting rant, strong language to give the threats more impact, then attack the lifestyle and self-image to bend the will, sounds like something Charles Manson could have written. Clap! Clap!
Blitzed, I've said this before, you have a very unique style propelled by unique talent, where's your f****n' publisher? The way you've composed this carefully, beginning with stark, even violent, images whittled down to The House on Pooh Corner...a seemingly impossible leap but you make it work for you! I get more amazed every piece of yours I read. This is going into my library favorites, so thank you for that! take care...dan
You writing gives the reader fear and that's good cause I see that you always write strong poems with challenging words and you delivered the feeling to the reader.
Insight.
Posted 9 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
9 Years Ago
fear, thats an interesting outlook on it. the whole reason i write on here is just to see what other.. read morefear, thats an interesting outlook on it. the whole reason i write on here is just to see what other ppls opinions are on here, and thats a new one. thanks for your insight Insight
i give them the plans i drew up
with thoughts methodically calculated
and so intricately placed ,
every outcome was accounted for
and algebraically related.
f*****g statistically graced,
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