Immortal Combat

Immortal Combat

A Poem by BLitZeD

**BLitZ3D**

Your hating? im Saitin, ill make sure you burn for this, catch a b***h baking/
Your faking? im Raiden, ill rape you in your urn for kicks, fatality left the b***h aching/
Your a b***h, just saying,/
If you where Goro id rip your f*****g arms off and watch you try and kick /
Im Onaga in this mother f****r, and your mothers just my f*****g trick/
Barraka Obama, with my eyes closed so i Kenshi this kid/ 
Slither like a Reptile through a Cage of his ribs/

**0M3gA Agg3L0S**

So... what the f**k was that?/ 
And who the f**k is BLitZ3D, always represented by a cat/
King of the jungle? well as a matter of fact.../
Im king of the pumpkins, your just an a*s named Jack/
This is your realm im in?/
 Look around I just told you my last names Skelington/
This hell you bring, well its my door to the bell you ring/

**AZRA3L**

Take you f*****g heads i shall/
Knife or a gun, slice, click, pow. pal/
Blade plows threw your neck, but the scene gets foul, how?/
Steel grinds your throat as you gasp to breath now/ 
In this passage you'l start  to feel relieved, wow,/
  Drowned on a boat, just let go, its time to believe, throw um a towel

© 2015 BLitZeD


Author's Note

BLitZeD
**BLitZeD** http://www.writerscafe.org/blitzed

**0m3gA Agg3L0s** http://www.writerscafe.org/blitzed

**AZRA3L** http://www.writerscafe.org/blitzed

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Can't appreciate all the "gangsta" bullshit

Posted 9 Years Ago


BLitZeD

9 Years Ago

it talks about mortal combat , the nightmare before christmas and someone dying on a boat, i dont se.. read more
It's kinda like a rap-battle, and i read it as such. I really enjoyed it, and it's pretty original. I don't think i have seen something like this on this site before.

Posted 9 Years Ago


BLitZeD

9 Years Ago

yea i versed myself 3 ways on this lol... here i got something for you. battle between me and EG_TEN.. read more
BLitZeD

9 Years Ago

http://www.writerscafe.org/writing/blitzed/1606195/
I don't even know how to react to that......

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

BLitZeD

9 Years Ago

i take it thats not a good thing? lol
Draven_Writes

9 Years Ago

It's both good and bad. Haha
BLitZeD

9 Years Ago

well glad we cleared that up? lmao
So What the f**k you..mad?
Those pumpkins wants to rap..
Well as I totally slice you with this flow
Slashing rhymes in this site
To all you madafackin HOeS
That can't hang with my Decker
Like dagger, OMEGA
Take their asses down its time for
Al Phalpa, cause all them mada has a"
A bogidi stingkin pek pek
Along with a nigiti flat flat puwet!
So think of it think of it feesh
Because O" u know what
Their grade two level lyrics makes me
Wana yawwwwnnn!!!!
Step!



This review was written for a previous version of this writing

Posted 9 Years Ago


Hmm, looks like your warming up!
Awesome graphics. And pix!

This review was written for a previous version of this writing

Posted 9 Years Ago


BLitZeD

9 Years Ago

thanks buddy

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