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A Poem by BLitZeD

Beat the bass to the floor, while the treble trembles and roars/
Tremors galore accompanied by mass reports, a violation of noise/ 
AWOL rebels rebelling, a mutual mutiny lyrics assemble like a collection of Avengers toys/
Smoke that green and Hulk up like a beast on roids, a god in my realm, lightning itself couldn't stop this boy/
Repulsive repulser cannons blow away your choice, hits on point every time, not a single words void/
 Reflexes are quick, mixed with a shield that cant be destroyed/
 feelings sneak in and sneak out every time the chalk hits the board/
Reeling  in realness from the remarks impossible to ignore/
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© 2015 BLitZeD


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Man, I think I could read your stuff all day, so I've decided to subscribe to your feed. I find it amazing how you start from scratch, seemingly adrift in a sea of undecided, and rattle off a piece that is so crisp in its structure and enlightened in its scope. I'm a fan, Blitz! take care...dan

Posted 9 Years Ago


BLitZeD

7 Years Ago

thanks bro, your words carry heavy meaning
I really like this one .

Posted 9 Years Ago


BLitZeD

9 Years Ago

: :)
Well written Blitzed. Good write

Posted 9 Years Ago


BLitZeD

9 Years Ago

Well then Terrence. Good review. lol thanks man
Hey Blitzed, you had versed a wonderful poem
That holds a warning sign, "cautious children playing"

I don't need to be incredible
Nor to be enhance
For my words had now regenerates
When I walked the Planks
Staring at the vast abyss
For as far as I can glance...
With nothing in my hands
But some faith-hoped for a chance
That could slipped through like a sand
But then Heroes of the Land
Had comes forth and take the stand
With some knowledge to be hold
Wildly-fresh-untamed and bold
The seekers of the truth
TC - The Curator,
And Mr BlitZed on Beast mode!

Brrrrrrrrr... it's getting cold..
LLL






Posted 9 Years Ago


BLitZeD

9 Years Ago

lol nice 1 man

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Added on September 29, 2015
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BLitZeD
BLitZeD

New Jersey Devil, FL



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