A Statement

quote the raven never more/

severed heads, bring the gore/

disrespect? i find no more, then in the haters, hates a chore/ 

heart beats slowly under floors/ 

opportunity not stopped by screen doors/ 

my style varies, words i w***e/ 

battles teach, the haters roar/

poetry's not what makes me snore/ 

but your lack of cultures got me tore/ 

Poe to Pac and back once more/ 

if you judge you'll never soar/ 

no birds to quote, cant make no noise/ 

maybe its the rhymes, i wonder, so i play on words  no more/ 

sentences of emotion withe no twist, 

Oliver himself wonders if the shoes will be filled correctly or be left feeling to big .

how can one judge me when his own writing the bird refuses to quote? 

i faced EG in a battle and yous decided  it was a disgrace to the art.

lyrically it was on point, i question how you would have fared in his place. 

A contest held in regards to the legends, idolized in this game, that was the point.

who the f**k are you to decide whats poetry and whats not?

words written on a page, your soul spared for all to witness? 

your souls corrupt and infected with the sickness. 

downplaying a bunch of kids who are refining there craft. 

because you don't agree? 

so for the last time i ask,

would the raven even bother to look at you and flutter his wings? 

ill take this time to quote Tupac, someone who gave no f***s. a legend of rap, and a poet in his own right. id like to say poetry isnt about what you think is romeo and Juliet, hamlet, or any other god damn thing youd like to add in. its a f*****g expression of ones self threw words, and the people that disagree are them self closed minded wana be poets.. how can you tell someone they are writting out of there league when you yourself dont get to determine what there league is..  so im taking back EG TENS apology to Emily, SoultrySoul, and Mattavilli.. there is no need to say sorry, nothing was done wrong and to all 4 of you i aplaude and encourage yous too keep practicing and dont let anyone tell you what league u write in. you define yourself and that statement is in its truest form when regarding poetry 

THE ROSE THAT GREW FROM CONCRETE 

Did you hear about the rose that grew
from a crack in the concrete? 
Proving nature's law is wrong it 
learned to walk with out having feet. 
Funny it seems, but by keeping it's dreams, 
it learned to breathe fresh air. 
Long live the rose that grew from concrete
when no one else ever cared. 

Tupac Shakur

Author's Note

http://www.writerscafe.org/groups/Writer%27s-Creed-%21/12119/forum/29391/

Reviews

[Insight "MH"]

Don't worry, and just write what you feel.

[BLitZeD]

i never worry lol

[Insight "MH"]

Good for you ^_^