Of Different Minds (Silent Poet ft. BLitz3D

Of Different Minds

****Silent Poet****BLitZ3D****

Time passes slowly, Mind traveling and unraveling in time what has shown me.,

It started out lonely, No...... 'I started out alone/

Searching to hurting, then letting go just to yearn,

Tears turned to smiles and then fears came about I reached for you in silence but then saw I was reading aloud.

So i dream about violence, and burning the crowd 

or do the opposite and hold them down, laughing as they drowned. 

My ears and heart beat with the sound. 

Not realizing the truth, I was always allowed. 

We can do what we want, its our life, the ninth of the clouds 

I'm ninth in a crowd, rain dropping slowly as I faint from the sound, 
Restraints so I'm down in pain as you drown, you came thoughts of saving me but slaying came about. I change trying to paint you til my brush figured it out, the colors were fading so I rushed to clear the piles, rearranging the picture but the dust became too loud,

Curse this easel, be ashamed, your pentagrams down,

 Fur restraints, easily im release from this bed post now.

Exercise the Exorcisms enterprise, 

your entitled to try or sit with the rest of them an stare at the sky.

Blood in there eyes, an entities reply, but i defend mine.

Like a goalie with a puck, i don't give a f**k, 

Slap this shot for me, diving block with a single stroke ow this brush. 

Stories so different minds miles apart, a heart that beats love and one bleeds with darts. As I read I'm lost but try to keep speed and believe in all that is flawed, I'm scarred and my souls barred with nights intertwined , seeking so much but disdains all I find,

As i rewind, back in the darkness, i realign, and B a line, i don't see the wrongness. 

In these words, so violent but harmless,

I try for that smart s**t, but its obvious who's not the strongest. 

So long live the bong hits, to ease the pain 

that they come along with.   

Author's Note

**Silent Poet** http://www.writerscafe.org/scripture

Reviews

[Shawna]

I like this collaboration a lot. The rhythm floes thought the back and forth, creating a very unique and interesting feel to this piece. Nicely done to both of you.

[Emily]

You two are such great collaborators! But, 4th stanza, 4th line, should be their, not there. Cool work!

[Mitali Shah]

Nicely penned collab Blitzed and Silent Poet. Growing better and better each time. God bless

[Shea McWilliams]

Wonderful as always. I love the vocabulary and just the general feel of this poem. I really feel the emotion poured into this. Great job, keep writing!

[dan]

BLITZED, Now THIS is outstanding! I don't know if this is more of your inspiration or that of Silent Poet, but this piece is practically CRACKLING with intensity, so vividly descriptive, almost like a manifesto (and I mean that in a GOOD way). The internal rhyming is right on point, the line construction simply dazzling. The best compliment I can give you is to tell you that I am filing this one away in my library favorites, and I don't do that very often. And I do agree: Long live the bong hits! take care...dan

[BLitZeD]

we both inspired each other lol, we just went back n forth going off each other. the only thing that was planned out and not left up to "lets see how it comes out" was the name. im glad you enjoyed it and im sure Poet would thank you for you words as well. it means alot that you are shelving it in your library. thank you

[dan]

My pleasure, and I dedicate my next toke off of the pipe to you and Silent Poet! take care...dan

[BLitZeD]

lol, honestly i couldn't ask for a better dedication

[E G TEN]

Hey Guys, surprisingly both your styles are not close but
Somehow identical, it wasn't hard for me to adjust when you
Two switches, loves.the modern day poetic approached,, looks
Easy, but very hard to do" Now pass that bong to your left hand
Side!! :-)

[R Smith]

sounds great read loud and fast, rap and poetry are one and the same and this is a great example of both arts, thank you :)

[Emily]

Great job both of you!
Well done!!

[Michael Wright]

Good job overall! The flow is a bit choppy