Magically Delicious

Magically Delicious

A Poem by BLitZeD

There is no Rainbow to jump,
 together we climb
and when we reach the top,
 together we dine
a feast of emotion 
cooked up by a rhyme
and at the end of the night,
 together we dive
no fear in our hearts,
 together we die
we weather the storm, 
while i smile you cry
she cant understand my reasons behind
so i laugh, say its ok , 
enjoy the stars in the sky
theirs no need to fight it, 
if you want you can try
but the gates are open, 
from your Place .. we land on mine
littered with mines 
placed in the field in disguise
my horseshoe is luck 
and together we ride
explosions of clovers
your cleaver in mind
darkness lit by blue moon  angels,
 in my heavens they guide
pot, gold and rainbows
she chills and we glide 
back up and away 
the pull of gravity binds
a balloon that bleeds
 tears of blood in my eyes
that makes the red balloon 
****so together we sigh****
sometimes in disguise, 
the hourglass looms
 but inside this glass you can hide
so we stay confined in this room, 
 and within time we confide
an then yet again
****together we sigh****
because this glass is hours
and ours till the doom of mankind
so to the end
****together we sigh****



Keyed Version 

There is no Place to jump,
 together we climb
and when we reach the top,
 together we dine
a feast of emotion 
cooked up by a rhyme
and at the end of the night,
 together we dive
no fear in our Life,
 together we die
we weather the storm, 
while i smile you cry
she cant understand my reasons behind
so i laugh, say its ok , 
enjoy the Power to Fly  in the sky
theirs no need to fight it, 
if you want you can try
but the gates are open, 
from your Place .. we land on mine
littered with mines 
placed in the field in disguise
my Speed  is luck 
and together we ride
explosions of Luck
your cleaver in mind
darkness lit by invisible angels, 
in my heavens they guide
pot, gold and Places
she chills and we glide 
back up and away 
the pull of gravity binds
a balloon that bleeds
 tears of blood in my eyes
that makes the power to float
****so together we sigh****
sometimes in disguise, 
Time looms
 but inside this glass you can hide
so we stay confined in this room, 
 and within time we confide
an then yet again
****together we sigh****
because this glass is hours
and ours till the doom of mankind
so to the end
****together we sigh****


© 2015 BLitZeD


Author's Note

BLitZeD
http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Lucky_Charms#Theme_song

Hearts - power to bring things to life
Shooting Stars - power to fly
Horseshoes - power to speed things up
Clovers - luck, but you will never know what kind of luck you'll get
Blue Moons - power of invisibility
Rainbows - instantaneous travel from place to place
Balloons - power to make things float
Hourglass - power to control time

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Nice work... I like the rhymes in it... love that there are a lot of powerful lines that give great imagery. Great piece!

Posted 9 Years Ago


magically delicious is the right title; words fell like snow flakes on an enchanted winter solstice night and the work of colouring your runes .......

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Posted 9 Years Ago


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silent poet

9 Years Ago

that was beautiful!!
This piece is really creative the format is rather jolly and the flow is excellent. ...i really like this piece :)

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Posted 9 Years Ago


BLitZeD

9 Years Ago

thank u much
you know I want to ask so many questions... I think you get a kick out of knowing you will never truly answer them.. and that's why I'm *sighing* lol

p.s sometimes, you just ain't right .. you be messing with my brain and you know it. *logging off* lmao

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Posted 9 Years Ago


silent poet

9 Years Ago

*the blue pill/moon? * I give up lol
I'm talking to the RIDDLER!
BLitZeD

9 Years Ago

not a riddle this time lol

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=zE7PKRjrid4
silent poet

9 Years Ago

lmao.. I AM DONE
Honestly, I loved it. Thank you MM.. lol and the cover? you got so many brownie points for that. I haven't smiled all day, so It's nice being able to. And the story was blitzed. No need for me to look in between because I can read ;)

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Posted 9 Years Ago



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