My Friend

My Friend

A Poem by BLitZeD

As i sit here drinking... 
this Budweiser, 

i sit here thinking...
smoking on my bud,
best believe i get wiser

Id like to portray, 
a story about my bud,

 Hes a father

Not your typical deadbeat, 
strong love for his daughter

One on the way,
 his path, 
Deviation, it don't bother... 

....Its a boy....
 
How do i say?
 
With these words and accuracy,
His emotions.. relay

Flippin the lead feet
Maybe Mozart on game day?.?.? 

Mafia status
willingly swims with the fishes,
rips threw these beats 
cant get enough, 
his worlds just to delicious  
 
Slow mo, hit rewind 
and let the instance replay
stuck in his own hell, 
the emotions re-haze

But the light, 
like Homer in the oceans that day 
illuminate the bat cave
but even at times 
the dark night 
all have to relive this
f**k, 
what a bad day

...........

We'll call his little girl a Siren, 
he's drawn in by her voice, 
the iceberg, no care's, 
hes driving , 
on a all to well known collision course, 

His own undoing,
 memories with her mother, 
hes reliving remorse

Old ties he's redoing, 
left with no other choice
in his eyes, hes  re-looping, 
the beat to this chorus
the sun don't shine 
in the darkest of forests

he will find his way 
this i am sure of 

until then 
i await the tour bus
to an ethical man 
that which he stands 
and rejoice in our auroras  

 

 

© 2015 BLitZeD


Author's Note

BLitZeD
rough draft, pace n rhymes need tweeking, i know

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still in all this is a lovely piece that explores the kind of man that is actually a MAN.. s**t trust me i know. nice work

Posted 9 Years Ago


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BLitZeD
BLitZeD

New Jersey Devil, FL



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