Lyrical Sex

Chameleon colored dress with the purple hair , 

pardon me a minute, i need a second to stare 

undress her with my eyes, picturing that skin bear 

 in this moment, the past is the past 

and all that s**t can stay there

Fangs retract, put my hand on her waist 

spin her around real fast

in the mirror we faced

my reflection came back

when i kissed the side of her face

Down to her neck 

started tangling that net

pushed up on it an she pushed right back

around the front my hands lead

spider weaving a web

Left to the breast, right between her legs

cuz she know im right between her legs

her right on mine, left on my face

read my mind 

to the bed we now she faced

slowly we moved, with emotions enraged

with every step we took, she shuttered in place

finally we made it, but not with out gods grace

she stuttered and said  with such a serious face

i thought your words where quick, but your fingers fast paced

i just smiled and said  you make a good case 

A world of sin, your about to get dragged in 

your head will spin, beg to put it in but 

about n down face, the mission never begins

she said my turn licked her lips an began

claims a sharp tongue but that thing was, oh man

 

Author's Note

1st Base

Reviews

[JayceeC]

This is one of those that you wonder if characters are dark fantasy or just those who like an alternative accessories in goth style. Correct bear skin (she's not a rug) to bare skin (get her naked). The only other part that I thought needed a chang was the leg/leg rhyme, but not quite sure how you'd change it, which is probably why it's there...lol.
Like the racy bits thrown in there. Every vamp needs a bit of fun.

[FateDictates]

the lyrical language leads to lustful longings ...

[Emily]

I've never read a erotica like this.
Very good poem!
Keep on writing!!

[Johnny]

The flow of this poem I noticed was kind of quick.. I had to pull-out every once in a while to stay on track ;)

(pun intended)

[annalysiar]

Very very nice. Detailed. Erotic. Visual.
its sensual so that you feel the words they make you almost feel the story.
nicely done.

[Dead]

ummm okay lol .

[costa siwale]

Intriguing and lyrical indeed. Sweet piece. Enjoyed this one

[silent poet]

Blitzed, Blitzed, Blitzed!!!!!! You turned my entire day/night around. Been thinking about you all day and felt kinda down. Right before I closed my eyes( I see this!) And that feeling you give me came right back out of the shadows, because it surely never disappeared. I LOVE THIS!! LOVE THIS!! and the smile on my face is so ridiculous, but I never want it to leave. The fact you used (sharp tongue) showed you pay attention to me. Lol you saw that on my reverb. Dragged in a world of sin stuck to me because it's how I Invision you, don't take that wrong. :) but its something I want to drown in. Everything about this, every word was BEAUTIFUL!! because I know you enough to know that this? IS YOUR WAY!! xoxo mwahh my blitzed, you're truly MY (one) ! And in life that is a blessing because some never get to experience theirs.. THANK YOU for this, thank you for being YOU!! I fuckn LOVE this.. Omg ;) :-*