Man Is God

the modern day religious resistance

 the downfall of Jerusalem good and evils coalition

the realization that god dosnt exist in this dimension

pointless wars to start the next Prohibition

the pressure builds up like a pond of retention

the result told threw history as demons and angels with pent up aggression

hostility for one, the other divine intervention

weapons of deception, 

another of mans creation

preach pages of a book to hide the deviation

the conscience the counselor in the mediation

meditation, the thoughts that provide the levitation

under god ill lie dead in this nation 

and when that time comes ill know iv done great things, 

beat in my ears stars in my eyes while i lie in my bed waiting

Reviews

[E G TEN]

Hey BlitZed, such strong words for a sensitive matter, much
respect for anyone who would write in a manner of which
they don't give a Donkeys A*s for what others might think
Of.. I tend to write the same, well expressed words, very cool
Write,, thanks.

[BLitZeD]

thank u sir, much appreciated

[Emily]

Very interesting and powerful! Good write!

[Emily]

Nice wording!!
Keep on writing!!!

[AaronFreitas]

An interesting write buddy... when you can spark thought and spark argument of good and bad, good and evil, religion or no religion you have done something good with your words. Writes shouldn't be about what everyone wants to read... writes should reflect what question you ask yourself as a person... the questions that spark thought and spark emotions. Write the s**t no one else writes is the way I see it. I love the thoughts buddy :) Good work!

[BLitZeD]

thanks for the encouragement man. thats wut i was goin for, wanted to see how people responded

[wordman]

there is a god,there is man and the Resistance will always be with us
but i can assue you the time is at hand

[Jordan]

Seems like edgelording to me. It's not awful, it's just not my thing I guess. Poetry is subjective and that's why I hate reviewing it.

[BLitZeD]

Fair enough sir

[h d e rushin]

My man writing mojo would be so proud.
But "man is God" is just some verbal interconvertibility. Especially in this country where
any withdrawal of such sacraments would get your shirt torn..(I mentioned such an
equation to my mothers Pastor and he never spoke to me again. Then Invited me to the revival.
But I still think it's ok to question all things under the sun. Perhaps that's the definition
of poetry Blitzed, the incessant questioning of all things even when the poem of it holds
no true resolution.

Your poetry is probing, which is good. Since probing is the objective. well done..

dana

[dead scribe]

Ohh ish, this goes with what I was sayin in gods of man

[BLitZeD]

ya, this is my follow up, had too, its been a minute ya know

[silent poet]

You and your bro are extremely similar, far as words and how deep you both use them to explain something. To me it's what makes you/him) so much more than your average poet,writer etc. Simplicity is best at some things but with a piece like this to simplify was not an option for such a diverse subject.. I personally am not one strong in this area but I do appreciate good scriptures. nice job, amazing intellect ..