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$@Lv@t10N

A Poem by BLitZeD

I dont write for you, 
and i dont rhyme for them, 
i do it for myself,
cuz thats just who i am, 
you dont have to like it,
you dont have to read it, 
you dont have to fight it, 
if you know you'll get defeated, 
this is just my outlet,
this is my salvation,
takes up all my time, 
and a lot of concentration,
takes away my pain, 
takes away frustration
im not who i was
im a transformation...

© 2015 BLitZeD


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Nice piece Blitzed. Keep it up

Posted 9 Years Ago


amen to that, dear author, we should never forget why do we write in the first place.

Posted 9 Years Ago


BLitZeD

9 Years Ago

agreed .
Love the visual you used for this poem and its message. Great write!

Posted 9 Years Ago


Nice work buddy... loved the rhyming in it and the delivery!

Posted 9 Years Ago


A great message, and well delivered, too. I completely agree with you, we should be who we are, unapologetically.
And, though you clearly stated that you simply write for yourself, thanks for sharing this with us anywyays ;)

Posted 9 Years Ago


Strong and honest words. I agree with your logic. We must write for our release. Can't try to make all folks content. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry and thoughts.
Coyote

Posted 9 Years Ago


Way to stand your ground, very well delivered
And flows strong like a current, well versed and
Poetic, cool stuff bro! Thanks for sharing!


Posted 9 Years Ago


BLitZeD

9 Years Ago

glad u enjoyed thank u sir
Great poem!!
Keep it up!!

Posted 9 Years Ago


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A very upfront declaration stating your purpose to write. I like that it is straight-up with no unnecessary filler clogging it up. Very well done. take care...dan

Posted 9 Years Ago


I see you brung me back here, now reading some of very first comments I remember why " ........................................................ but i'll keep that to myself

Posted 9 Years Ago


BLitZeD

9 Years Ago

crazy how it played out from these comments huh? ;)

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Added on May 31, 2015
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BLitZeD

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