Story of an Ang3l

He can catch it,

Steel from the ratchet,

Trim his top, F**k a tomahawk, Gimme a hatchet,

Maybe a rusty ax, Some gas, And a box of matches,

Add in a Jason mask an ill show you some sad s**t.

This is the death of another tag,

Tag ripped 

like a soul from a body, sooo...

I'm no longer a SoLDjA,

 No longer a GHOSt,

Not even BLitZ3D,

This is OM3Ga AGG3L0s,

Grab the bull by the horns because i got horns like a bull.

Just missing the right side, it was ripped from my skull.

I bear the scares of a warrior, earned in full.

If the horn ain't enough, check the bent up halo.

I play 4 both sides , Stand tall and Creep low.

Quick to burn threw ya, an slow smoking a O.

 Always been Alpha, I liked to play that part.

Now i'm out-casted, a choice made in my heart,

Because if u think for a second that bravos made a move, 

 You didn't stand  a chance from the start.

Every things been planned out.

I dug my own grave an covered it with a f*****g tarp,

Only move your making is one into a trap,

 Jeronomo, 

a precaution, to cover my tracks.

A hunter cant hunt whats hunting him back.

The classic story of how opposites attract.

An when your attacked,

Like a zombie to a Hashin,

 A cat to a rat, 

A bat to a rat. 

A gangster with a bat to a rat,

22. threw the black to land in the back of the rats back for ratting behind your back like a rat,

Call that echo location, 

An that rat bagged up in the trash, dispatched naked to an undisclosed destination 

Reviews

[Mitali Shah]

Good one Blitzed. keep going

[Emily]

Really powerful and raw! Nice!

[silent poet]

I bear the scares of a warrior, earned in full. you already know your biggest fan.. you take readers to your world and that is what a true artist in any form does.. xoxo

[BLitZeD]

always a flattering review from you :) thank you my dear poet. im glad you enjoyed. thank you very much

[silent poet]

always welcome!!

[Shea McWilliams]

I read a comment on this saying it was unbalanced and i have to disagree. The way you write is unique indeed but it is fitting to your style, I believe. This work is marvelous and once again I am impressed by your rhyming skills, intentional or not, because I do not have the capacity to write good rhymes. Great job, Blitzed. Keep writing!

[dan]

Blitzed, the website system auto-corrected the spelling of your name. I spelled it right. Now I have some great things to say and an opinion you may not like but it's just me being honest. First, the writing is incredible. You may not like the band but I can see these words being made into lyrics in a song by Linkin Park. It's got that hip-hop/metal edge to it that screams for a Linkin Park sledgehammer backbeat. Now my opinion: I think your writing is good enough to not feel you need to do the bizarre spelling of words. It's a gimmick, and I don't think your writing needs to be bolstered by gimmicks. It's not just that I'm older; if I was 25 I'd be suggesting the same. Gimmicks are necessary to call more attention to something that may not warrant the extra attention. You are PAST that! My opinion, do what you'd like. take care...dan

[BLitZeD]

honestly, from your comment i feel like you really do like what i write. and i appreciate that. Unless im spelling BLitZeD i try not to type like that, i used to spraypaint stuff, so along with blitzed being a writing alias it was also a tag i used, the most recent tag besides AZra3L, or omega agelos as its referred to in this one (the last angel), but thats why they are written like that...i didnt know how else to show that with out you personally knowing me....n ya i listen to mostly rap but i do like linkon park, along with korn slipknot and disturbed..even limp biscit n kid rock, all very relevent during my childhood. but ya i can see what you mean, if you get a free moment read the piece that i did called new generation, obviously you can rap that n it was made to a rap beat but i often find myself singing the lyrics to that in a country fashion, i like to see how my words fit into other ganaras "pardon spelling", and that would be a prime example

[Emily]

Nice wording!
I also like the meaning!

[Michael Wright]

Sounds good but unbalanced
Not bad overall again very expressive

[wordman]

sounds like you poured it out,i can see a rap song here

[silent poet]

I like it a lot!! your words come faster when your mood changes, you dig deep 4real.. nice work